Angel of Death

Howdy Clo! Well this written amazingly well and I couldn't stop reading it from start to finish. Usually when people write stories that don't have a lot of dialogue in ...

Wow! Thanks you two! Kat, I'm really glad that you like my work. And Ash, I am speechless. Really, I am. You're an amazing writer and to hear this from ...

Clo >> *hugs* Thanks for your lovely review. I agree with you on the blond mane thing, it is horribly cliche and bland. I know I can come up with ...

Note: This deals with homosexuality, so if you're uncomfortable with this subject don't read this. I am writing this for Gadi's contest and I am just trying to experiment with ...

Hey KJ! I nodded, thinking. I would have to snatch the TV remote from Mom in the car so she wouldn’t turn to the news. I had to keep what ...

Hey Ky! Thanks for the heads up. Really, I don't see anything to nit-pick about. I'm really thirsting to find out what is going on here but I guess I'll ...

Hey Sunny! I really liked this. Especially the opening line. The title caught my attention, especially since we're getting ready to read Romeo and Juliet in my English class. You ...

Hey KJ!! Thanks for the PM! And yes, I think you should continue this. Autumn is a great character and I am really curious to see where this is all ...

NOT ACCEPTING/ RETIRED Name: Angel or Angie whichever one you prefer just please don't call me Angel of Death Age: 14 What you write: Hmm? I write poetry, Other Fiction, ...

Hey there Dallas! Haven't seen you around these parts, so you must be new. I'm Angel of Death but everyone just calls me Angel. Welcome to YWS!! I hope you're ...

This part was written well, and though it was uneventful, I haven't lost interest. I've learn to trust you when you have these filler chapters, so I know where you're ...

Atonement by Ian McEwan So far, it's a good book. I like the way he writes. ~Angel

Hey Ash! I was so excited to read this! Awe, but it's too bad I was the last to get here because everyone found all of the nit-picks. Well, I'll ...

Note: I just finished writing this and I'm not too sure about the beginning. It seems a little choppy to me but anyways, this is using the same main character ...

Here again! Gosh, this really had my heart racing at the speed of light! I couldn't stop reading and I'm not sure if I saw any mistakes or not because ...